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                                                  From Afar

           The way you smile, is like the brightest of all the colors.

  The way you laugh, is like a little infant screaming for joy on a Christmas morning, since St. Nicholas had stopped by the night before.

  The way you sing, is like the sound of birds chirping on the first spring morning.

       The way you act, is so brave and dedicated like a soldier prepared for going into battle, knowing that it might be his last.

           The way you treat others, with your free-willed spirit and open heart is like Jesus dying on the cross for our sins.

  The way you are so quiet, and secretive is like a mystery that was unsolved and  unknown.

              Out of all the things that you never would of guessed,

               I wish you knew how I feel so blessed to have known you.

                                          But until then,

                            I'll always be in the shadows,

                                 Hidden among the mist,

                             Wishing upon a shooting star,

                     Watching you and only you, from afar.

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Written during my freshman year.
For anyone, who knows what it's like to watch from afar.
About a guy I thought I loved, but it didn't turn out that way.
Comments, please. :)

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:iconsilentgilo:
I know exactly how you feel :) This is such a great poem :D Well done :)
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~Th3Chos3nOn3 Oct 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. =)
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:iconroxannexron:
I really enjoyed it. Nice work :D
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~Th3Chos3nOn3 Feb 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you =D
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