My first attempt at no rhyming. Note
: This was written to my first love, and we're no longer together.
I honestly don't know why people keep favoring it, but please, I have a hard time reading through it.
If you leave a comment, I'll try my best to reply.
I love this piece, but it's difficult going through heartbreak.
Christopher Jacob Tyler Cassady, if you ever see this, please know that I'll always love you deep down.
We are no longer speaking, but these are all I have left.
To anyone that reads this, I'd like feedback on it.
Can you relate to the imagery in the poem?
Is it realistic and smooth-sounding?
What do you suggest I do to fix it?