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"I need you."

           "Promise?"

"I love you."

          "Always."
This might be a little confusing,
but it's between a boy and girl.
One saying they need the other,
and then they reply, "You promise?"
And then other says they love them,
and basically, one replies, "Always."
They are finishing each other's sentences. (:

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:iconfroststripe:
Froststripe Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Sweet.. makes me sad though..
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:iconth3chos3non3:
Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Why's that hun? D:
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:iconfroststripe:
Froststripe Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
First boyfriend just broke up with me. Said he loves me as a best friend. And he told me he loved me alot. Sill in love with him... Only been a week, but this made me happy too. Made me remember good times.
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Desheria Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's too overly simple to be anything other than sweet.

(the word 'love' with letters being risen like that. It's distracting. Your 'need' and 'always' being bolded and italicized is fitting though. )
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:iconth3chos3non3:
Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I'm thinking I might change it. And thanks. :)
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:iconwildho:
Wildho Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011
Ow, beautiful and cute.
I loved the "Always." <333
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:iconth3chos3non3:
Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, glad you liked it. :)
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:iconburningcrimsonlove:
BurningCrimsonLove Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011
That's cool :)
Love the effect of finishing each others sentences, very cute :)
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:iconth3chos3non3:
Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :3
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:iconburningcrimsonlove:
BurningCrimsonLove Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
You're welcome :)
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:iconemipark26:
EmiPark26 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011
I'm not feeling this at all.
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:iconth3chos3non3:
Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry, that you aren't feeling anything. :/
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WRITERandPOET Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Student Writer
That's just...amazing^^
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:iconth3chos3non3:
Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :meow:
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
<3 Don't we all prefer comments?

:giggle: I like this. I am not sure I like the formatting, it almost feels like a distraction. But I think you've done a good job of preventing that. It certainly gets across the idea of multiple speakers.

if i could promise
eternity,
you know that i would
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:iconth3chos3non3:
Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, I do enjoy comments. :meow: And thank you for the feedback, but I adore the formatting. I just found how to use different formats, so I'm trying them out. Plus, beautiful way of thinking. :meow:
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:giggle: =]
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SeikoHonda Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011
Interesting. It's brighter than some of the others I've just got done reading ^^; lol
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:iconth3chos3non3:
Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:p Thank you for the watch, and faves. :D
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kiwifrog Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011
So cute <3 I didn't think it was confusing at all. c:
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:iconth3chos3non3:
Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, well, that's great! And thank you. :meow:
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Cat-Tracker Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Student Writer
It's beautiful, innocent... pure.
The line "You promise?" sounds so simple, yet the implications of the promise are so great. Most fantastic.
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Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, glad you liked it. :D
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:iconpheonix333:
pheonix333 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011
Very sweet :aww:
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:iconth3chos3non3:
Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :meow:
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:iconspuffy12:
Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awe, so cute :heart:
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:iconth3chos3non3:
Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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:iconspuffy12:
Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :3
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:iconmimi-mako:
Mimi-Mako Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
How cute! :D
It reminded me of my man. :heart:
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:iconth3chos3non3:
Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awe, glad you could relate. :)
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wickedimpulse Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Student Writer
I love this.

Such poignant things in 8 word statements.

<3
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:iconth3chos3non3:
Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, glad you loved it. <3
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:iconwickedimpulse:
wickedimpulse Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Student Writer
You are most welcome, hun. :)

<3
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:iconfiredimond:
Firedimond Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Professional General Artist
I love this. :heart: it reminds me of my sweetheart and me. Great job!
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:iconth3chos3non3:
Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :) Glad you could relate. :nod:
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:iconfiredimond:
Firedimond Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Professional General Artist
No problem. =)
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:iconbravewing:
Bravewing Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011
I agree with ~Jinxye it is very cute! :D
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:iconth3chos3non3:
Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. c: Glad you like it!
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:iconjinxye:
Jinxye Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011
Awww, that's cute! :love:
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:iconth3chos3non3:
Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :3
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:iconjinxye:
Jinxye Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011
You're welcome!
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