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b r o k e n."You. broke. me."

          "Sorry?"

"Sorry's lost its meaning."
y o u rself.Love yourself, before you love another♥
weak.Only you make me feel weak♥
THE TRUTHNobody's
sorry
till
they
get
caught
Why?Why did you abandon me?
   {I could have s w o r n we where meant to be.}

Why did you leave?
     {I thought you said you l o v e d me.}

Why did you go?
        {You told me that you n e e d e d me.}

Why did you have to hurt me like this?
                     {I thought we where |s|t|r|o|n|g| enough to make it.}

Why did you need to cut me so deeply?
    {I n e v e r thought this would happen to me.}

Why did you need to show me what a broken heart is like?
       {I was better off thinking it was just a metaphor,
   & Not the physical feeling of my chest caving in & my heart c r a c k i n g down the center.}

Why did you
o v e r.She believed
Happily-ever-afters
in true lovers.
You Better HopeIf a look could kill...

Hun, you better hope I'm blind.
BeautifulI don't feel beautiful,
And even though I know I am,
I don't feel loved.
I no longer believe in wishes;
I no longer believe in dreams,
For those things are things
That little girls believe in
And I am no longer little.
I know I need a change
In Life,
But I don't know how
To change it.
I don't know how to be happy
On my own.
I don't know how to get back
To the girl I used to be.
Lands of Unknown
Take me to the lands of unknown
Hold my hand; love me with all your heart
Your smile and passion…
That's all I want

Get me out of here
Show me the sun again
Show me the flowers and the birds,
never ending sound of the waves…
Happy Valentines.The smell of flowers, of chocolate and cake.
The sweet embrace of one heart's intake.
The lovely writings that are dealt with the soul.
The uncertainty of your self-control.

The many hours spent on the gift.
The lack of thoughts gone adrift.
The quiet words left unsaid,
Only for those whose tears were shed.

The waking to know that you're still single.
Lest you forget, you're ready to mingle.
So you arise with a smile.
And leave it to that artistic style.

Today would be the day
that's gone astray.
Because today's way
Is Valentine's day.
Take the LeapDon't shut your door
to my loneliness

All I want you to do
is hold me.

Don't shut your eyes
to my tears

I wish you would
wipe them away.

Don't shut your ears
from my cries

I want you to
kiss me.

Just hold your arms
out,

I'm willing to
take the leap.
t r u t h."...I'm in love."

          "With who?"

"...you."

         "...me too."
When you get older„You'll understand when you get older", she said, smiling her careless smile.
She had listened to my stories, she stood all my whys and hows. Her expression never changed.
She died a year ago. I wonder when I will understand.
h e l l."I'd go through hell and back."

        "For?"

"You."

       
p r o v e."Don't tell me you love me."

                      "Prove it."
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"I need you."

           "Promise?"

"I love you."

          "Always."

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This might be a little confusing,
but it's between a boy and girl.
One saying they need the other,
and then they reply, "You promise?"
And then other says they love them,
and basically, one replies, "Always."
They are finishing each other's sentences. (:

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~Froststripe Mar 14, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Sweet.. makes me sad though..
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~Th3Chos3nOn3 Mar 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Why's that hun? D:
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~Froststripe Mar 15, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
First boyfriend just broke up with me. Said he loves me as a best friend. And he told me he loved me alot. Sill in love with him... Only been a week, but this made me happy too. Made me remember good times.
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~Desheria Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's too overly simple to be anything other than sweet.

(the word 'love' with letters being risen like that. It's distracting. Your 'need' and 'always' being bolded and italicized is fitting though. )
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~Th3Chos3nOn3 Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I'm thinking I might change it. And thanks. :)
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~Wildho Feb 3, 2011
Ow, beautiful and cute.
I loved the "Always." <333
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~Th3Chos3nOn3 Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, glad you liked it. :)
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~BurningCrimsonLove Feb 3, 2011
That's cool :)
Love the effect of finishing each others sentences, very cute :)
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~Th3Chos3nOn3 Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :3
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~BurningCrimsonLove Feb 4, 2011
You're welcome :)
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